I was searching and searching. Turning around I spotted it in the corner of my eye. What was `it`? I followed it under tractors and over hay bales. It stopped, turned around and starred at me. Its body didn’t leave my sight. Suddenly it scuttled through my legs and banged into a lamppost. Gazing over it my jaw dropped. It was a Black Widow. I starred at it and fainted. My eyes opened and it was on me, eating my shoes. Screaming at it I jumped up and ran away. I was petrified. It was after me….
I like how you you used lots of descriptive words and how you used “petrified “.
From Lewis
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hi kiki great story we loved it we liked the way you did all the punctuation
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Hi Kiki,
This was a very dramatic piece you wrote this week and I loved it.
I could feel your fear. I think I’d have fainted as well if I saw a Black Widow.
Hopefully, you got away.
Keep up the great work.
Mrs Boyce
Ireland.
https://mrsboycesclass.100wc.net/
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