What would you think if you saw robots? Well this is what I thought. A day at the zoo with my family, turned into a robot invasion.
We were walking along to the cafe, which were near the penguins, suddenly we heard a blood-curdling scream, we ran in the direction of the spine-chilling noise. It led us to outside the cafe, a woman cowering under the deep stare of a…. STONE ROBOT! My dad lunged at the beast, but only got dislocated shoulder.
“HOW DARE YOU!” The robot growled.
“I AM THE KING OF ROBOWORLD!”
“Silence.” A new voice announced.
Writers' club 
Hello Hannah Rose and Maia,
I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
You have used some terrific describing words in particular spine-chilling and blood-curdling. I think my boys would love those so I might add them to our WOW words. Thank you for sharing!
Good work this week.
Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)
Cork.
Ireland
https://mrsboycesclass.100wc.net/
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Thank you Mrs Boyce!
Hannah-Rose and Maia
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Hi I like your story because it reminds me of a film called the Terminator and there’s is so much dialogue but I wonder how did your dad dislocate his shoulder? Goodbye from Tim.
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